My Story, "REACHING MY OBJECTIVE": Re-Edited and Reposted

REACHING MY OBJECTIVE is a story I wrote 14 years ago. It's a favorite of mine, and I was surprised at how well it came together. Looking it over recently, I saw that it needed some very minor editing. I just finished doing that, and reposted the story on my sites. It's a hard-hitting tale about people trying to reach their goal in life, whatever that is. I'm amazed at how well this story held up over the years-and I'm a ruthless critic of my own work. Take a read and let me know what you think.